Friday, 3 May 2019

Creative writing wiki 1

This week we have been learning how to create a piece of writing using a picture  to help us. First we had a class brainstorm on what the picture was about, then we brainstormed some adjectives. Finally we started our writing. I am sharing it with you, please leave me a comment. Thanks!




Wiki 1 Wāhanga 2 Writing starter


We are going to another planet far, far away this week!
 


One day there was a little place that had lots of people living in side. Then one day someone came and took some people away
Only the adults got taken,  the children were still left alone one by one they got turned into trees. The sky was as white as a sheep. I can smell lots of smoke and burnt wood. Suddenly when I was there I could see something black they were bats! I cried then I tried to run but this giant thing tried to get me I cried I said help! But no one came to help me .
                                                      
 

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activity 1

Kia ora,today during class time I have been having a look at the summer learning journey here is my work for activity 1 where you find a pic...

kaley